[TEASER] Blossom Detective Holmes, Fall 2017

I don't know if it's too late, but I'd strongly recommend changing the title. More specifically the word 'selfie'. Especially since your story doesn't look like it's set in the modern world. This word draws negative connotations to your story, with that whole social movement/craze, and I don't know if you want to be associated with such a fad-like word. It'll become outdated extremely quickly. And I know that it creates alliteration with the 's' sounds, but you could use a different word.
Also, unless your detective is in someway related to Sherlock Holmes, I'd advise against using the name 'holmes', as it will mean people will compare this detective story to sherlock, which also might make sherlock something to judge your comic against. It's best to go with original ideas.
Best of luck; this looks really cool!